It had a good intro, but it disapointed me in the end. I was hoping for better because your piano intro was good. You just did'nt used the fact that you could do a better transition between the piano and the bass(like a drop of some kind or even integrate slowly the beat to the piano). I've been listening to music of Newgrounds for about 5 years and many are better.
All of this review is for you to enhance your music and your work. Don't take it personal.
I give you a 2.5/5 and a 6/10 on this.